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its pretty sweet. I really love the breakbeat with that punchy drum you use for the build up at 0:16 and the snare you use after.

Clean and powerful. I love the intrumental/part.

Vernam responds:

Ths a lot for review)

that rocks ! really like the kick and bass.

Complete it, please. You have to make some insane dubstep shit out of it..

the song finally passed the 100k views :D

Pretty simple an straightforward, I like it :D . Keep working on it (an add some more stuff) .

Love it. It's realy straight forward but as the same time complex enough to not be too repetitive. Looking forward for the final version.

I found your youtube channel and end up here.
I think the track is awesome but perhaps the build up is too simple to really bring the climax at it best. For instance you could layer the main lead with another one and then play with a frequence filter (think about the cuttoff of the lead ). Also what about a saw bass in the intro, next you could put a frequence filter on the breakbeat build up (its sound awesome) ...
Anyway, overhaul the track is good but it could be better with a bit more work.

Very nice piece indeed. Which VST do you use for the piano?

Stargenx responds:

Thanks for the review! I use whatever comes in Logic Pro 9.

really good .
Just try perhaps to make your drums a bit more divers (what about some nice breaks to introduce change in the melody?).
Also layer your lead (with a saw lead/ a pluck - pretty whatever you think fit) and play with the cutoff. You can also put the second lead an octave higher.

viewtifulday responds:

Thank you for the constructive criticism! It's not too often I get any here on Newgrounds, haha

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