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love it

kirja100 responds:

:DD

awesome!

kirja100 responds:

Thanks!

It's sweet and sound really fluid (thanks to the mastering). A bit to repetitive though.

FEAST responds:

You hit the spot my nikka! Im adding in moar shizzle right meow!

Clean and powerful. I love the intrumental/part.

Vernam responds:

Ths a lot for review)

Very nice piece indeed. Which VST do you use for the piano?

Stargenx responds:

Thanks for the review! I use whatever comes in Logic Pro 9.

really good .
Just try perhaps to make your drums a bit more divers (what about some nice breaks to introduce change in the melody?).
Also layer your lead (with a saw lead/ a pluck - pretty whatever you think fit) and play with the cutoff. You can also put the second lead an octave higher.

viewtifulday responds:

Thank you for the constructive criticism! It's not too often I get any here on Newgrounds, haha

Just a couple things :

First - try to use claps at the beginning instead of snares (around 00:05 -00:15) it would be more catchy.
Then - the kicks and the reverse bass lack (especially the reverse bass) lack of power compare to the lead.
Next - layer your lead - with a more distorted melody and a sharped one and play with the cutoff filter trough the song. The sound get more interesting
Also - I think the intro/ break would be better if you try to put 1- A pad + a pluck (playing the lead)
or 2- kick + screetcher.
Finally - what about some nice vocals to give more depth to the song?

Anyway, still it's really good, Im just bitching around..

VelociD responds:

The track was made in 2010 or 2011 and was initially supposed to have vocals ( and did have ), but I took them out.
Lost the project files, so I can't change it anyway.

I still like it =).

Ggood song. Just be careful next when using a low pass filter cause have some distorsion noise on the track at the beginning...

Oakwood responds:

Very true, I've got that problem in a lot of my songs. Probably should be more careful with that. :)

make it longer :D

DjEagle responds:

I'm working on it!! Lol

Nice lead :D

Nice :D (just maybe try to use a frequency filter with the bass at the begining)
Btw how are you doing to make such an awesome lead?

Catstuffer responds:

Would you like a little less higher freq. in the bass? I soley used Nexus in this song so it's a premade lead.

Thanks for reviewing!

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