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Just a couple things :

First - try to use claps at the beginning instead of snares (around 00:05 -00:15) it would be more catchy.
Then - the kicks and the reverse bass lack (especially the reverse bass) lack of power compare to the lead.
Next - layer your lead - with a more distorted melody and a sharped one and play with the cutoff filter trough the song. The sound get more interesting
Also - I think the intro/ break would be better if you try to put 1- A pad + a pluck (playing the lead)
or 2- kick + screetcher.
Finally - what about some nice vocals to give more depth to the song?

Anyway, still it's really good, Im just bitching around..

VelociD responds:

The track was made in 2010 or 2011 and was initially supposed to have vocals ( and did have ), but I took them out.
Lost the project files, so I can't change it anyway.

I still like it =).

Ggood song. Just be careful next when using a low pass filter cause have some distorsion noise on the track at the beginning...

Oakwood responds:

Very true, I've got that problem in a lot of my songs. Probably should be more careful with that. :)

sick :) keep the good stuff going

it's "primary disease" not desease but any your remix is good downloading

make it longer :D

DjEagle responds:

I'm working on it!! Lol

Nice lead :D

Nice :D (just maybe try to use a frequency filter with the bass at the begining)
Btw how are you doing to make such an awesome lead?

Catstuffer responds:

Would you like a little less higher freq. in the bass? I soley used Nexus in this song so it's a premade lead.

Thanks for reviewing!

Just awesome :D

The song is awesong bu maybe a bit too long to keep with the same melody all long, anyway I think it worth 10/10. Nice work ;)

Just so annoying to listen

Actually I listen to the whole song and it felt like torture to heard this dissonance in the lead to the begining to the end. In fact the piano alone at the begining was cool but seriously you really need to fix this lead and get some basic music theory!
So 5/10 (for the sweet piano melody)

Stavier responds:

Well, at least you have a reason, but half the points?? I didn't think it was that annoyin'. I guess I might get back to it cuz this song has had like 5 other demo versions of it. I'm also tellin' you now this isn't my best song ever so yeah.

Nice dude :)

I like a lot your "crispy" bass at the begining. I think the lead and the pad are just fine but for the drum part you shouldn't drop the kick at the begining (it's feeling more powerfull when you drope it after) try instead to make a build up with a snare rythm also btw make your snare/clap/cymabal/everything drum part else than kick "dryer". Otherwise keep going it already pretty awesome :)

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